“I suppose from here on out we’ll be spared the trouble of our weekly argument over whether to send Echo to the Attic.” She looks up at him at last. “My, whatever will we talk about now. Television? I hope we won’t be forced to resort to the weather.” So so Adelle. Just perfectly amazingly in character.
“Ms. DeWitt’s your friend. Lately, she looks sad. Maybe,” Sierra theorizes, “you should have breakfast together.” I just needed to mention this 'cause I love the dolls noticing D/D. I don't know why, but I do.
Otherwise this was just generally brilliant. There was a beautiful bit of darkness and realism in it, Dominic's memories are the clearest bit of this. And it was mixed in with the desperation and the love between Adelle and Laurence and their interactions so beautifully with your prose. The ending is fantastic too. BASICALLY I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE THIS! (as usual :D)
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So so Adelle. Just perfectly amazingly in character.
“Ms. DeWitt’s your friend. Lately, she looks sad. Maybe,” Sierra theorizes, “you should have breakfast together.”
I just needed to mention this 'cause I love the dolls noticing D/D. I don't know why, but I do.
Otherwise this was just generally brilliant. There was a beautiful bit of darkness and realism in it, Dominic's memories are the clearest bit of this. And it was mixed in with the desperation and the love between Adelle and Laurence and their interactions so beautifully with your prose. The ending is fantastic too. BASICALLY I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE THIS! (as usual :D)