ext_190206 ([identity profile] derevko-child.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2010-01-12 08:45 am (UTC)

I love how you intercut the scenes, especially the one in Dr. Saunders' office, Adelle watching Victor and then Adelle/Roger and then Adelle/Laurence. AHEEE. It made my heart go all flaily.

I also like Adelle sitting on the chair cut to Dominic sitting on her chair. Beautifully done.

I'm not calling you a thief,
Just don't steal from me


*whispers* he stole your heart and you're angry that you never realized it until it was too late

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