ext_10714 ([identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2010-01-12 08:39 pm (UTC)

Oh, man, thank you so much!! I'm really glad you enjoyed this!

Everyone always writes it rains in England, so when I read this I made a frown-y face, ~its not always raining~ then I looked out the window and it was raining. LOL you are right. It does tend to rain. ♥

Hahaha! The whole reason I put that little exchange in was because I vaguely referenced it in one of my earlier fics about them, and I was in such a bizarre state of 'I will tackle everything, everything in this fic, even my past fanfics!!!' that I just -- put it there. And dude, at least it's England! That way, raininess seems awesome! It rained nonstop for three weeks when I was home for Christmas break, and that's Alaska. It's just not the same. Damn it, Alaska!

There is a sense of cautious chivalry in this whole scene, god Mr Dominic I love you.

I want to build shrines to the phrase 'cautious chivalry' as applied to Dominic; it makes my heart go pitter-patter!

DAMN. I cannot wait to see Adelle's reaction to this. She is going to be so pissed on so many levels. I think she will be pissed, for sure, but accept it more easily and with less ~something~ (I can't think of the word I am searching for) than she did when she found out about Mr Dominic. Less bitterness maybe? I see it as a much less personal betrayal, of course :D

I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS SO MUCH. It's just like -- gah, our poor girl. I really, really hope that they reference it in relation to Dominic's betrayal. Possibly in a scene where Adelle and Dom talk about their feelings. (I can't stop dreaming big! It's becoming a problem!)

(Isn't it funny, I feel comfortable calling Adelle, Adelle but I never call Mr Dominic Laurence...pointless thought)

Hahaha, same here! Adelle is pretty much Adelle to me, but the notion of calling Dominic Laurence or calling the ship Adelle/Laurence confuses my brain so much. Thank goodness their last names alliterate so snappily; solves so many problems!

Thanks again for the awesome feedback!!

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