THANK YOU SO MUCH! Firstly, for ordering me not to focus on things that are real (like, that's motivation enough for me!), and secondly, for this most awesome of comments!
Bwahaha, I am so happy you enjoyed the high section! I had way too much fun with that. I just finished writing a zilllllllllions page long (well, er, okay, that's a slight exaggeration) story that was first person and kind of goofy, so writing someone's ridiculous thought process came way too easily to me, to the point where I was like, 'Okay, this is Laurence Dominic, I should tone it down.' Except then I remembered the part where he stroked his sleeve and dubbed it soft like a kitty, and then I was validated.
Oh they're disregard for human life, I shouldn't like it as much as I so obviously do.
Hahahaha, LOVE! They're just so matchingly wicked over it, how can we not find it adorable & delight-inducing! I made an icon to express this very sentiment earlier:
DeWitt and Dominic ♥ torturing people and then chuckling over it later! Maybe this should be gross; however, their magic instead renders it adorable. It's just the way things are.
I like how high Dominic is basically expressing all of my fannish feelings about Adelle.
Hahaha, RIGHT? I have no shame! However: Dominic spends like all day every day around Adelle, and therefore gets to bask in her amazing more than anybody. There's no way he could just be immune to that, right??
This is so how I see her reaction, and I love that you had it.
I really liked writing that part, and trying to make it just as absolutely cold and hard and fierce as humanly possible. I think that rather than suggesting that she doesn't care about him at all in scenes like that one and the others where she's awful to him, it's more like ... confirmation of exactly how much she cares. How awful she is equals how affected she secretly feels. The utter epitome of this to me will, I think, always be her face in A Spy in the House of Love when she interrogates him, where it's just so blank and so hardcore and expressionless that somehow you can see the pain it's causing her to be that utterly unaffected and merciless. AUGH, OLIVIA GODDESS WILLIAMS. ♥
And, wow, this comment got gigantic! Again, thank you so much!!
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Bwahaha, I am so happy you enjoyed the high section! I had way too much fun with that. I just finished writing a zilllllllllions page long (well, er, okay, that's a slight exaggeration) story that was first person and kind of goofy, so writing someone's ridiculous thought process came way too easily to me, to the point where I was like, 'Okay, this is Laurence Dominic, I should tone it down.' Except then I remembered the part where he stroked his sleeve and dubbed it soft like a kitty, and then I was validated.
Oh they're disregard for human life, I shouldn't like it as much as I so obviously do.
Hahahaha, LOVE! They're just so matchingly wicked over it, how can we not find it adorable & delight-inducing! I made an icon to express this very sentiment earlier:
DeWitt and Dominic ♥ torturing people and then chuckling over it later! Maybe this should be gross; however, their magic instead renders it adorable. It's just the way things are.
I like how high Dominic is basically expressing all of my fannish feelings about Adelle.
Hahaha, RIGHT? I have no shame! However: Dominic spends like all day every day around Adelle, and therefore gets to bask in her amazing more than anybody. There's no way he could just be immune to that, right??
This is so how I see her reaction, and I love that you had it.
I really liked writing that part, and trying to make it just as absolutely cold and hard and fierce as humanly possible. I think that rather than suggesting that she doesn't care about him at all in scenes like that one and the others where she's awful to him, it's more like ... confirmation of exactly how much she cares. How awful she is equals how affected she secretly feels. The utter epitome of this to me will, I think, always be her face in A Spy in the House of Love when she interrogates him, where it's just so blank and so hardcore and expressionless that somehow you can see the pain it's causing her to be that utterly unaffected and merciless. AUGH, OLIVIA GODDESS WILLIAMS. ♥
And, wow, this comment got gigantic! Again, thank you so much!!