ext_54317 ([identity profile] demonqueen666.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2009-10-31 03:52 am (UTC)

(Perhaps the reason she has always liked him so is because he seems – seemed – so very capable of withstanding her.)

I just...really like that line. I...can't even.

How well it fits the pair of them, to speak of things like this in the way that lovers whisper.

YES. Yes it DOES, and, oh god, how do I love the utter perfection you've fond in capturing and describing the two of them and their relationship this way. That IS so THEM, and they're such a scary pair, and it turns me on a little.

And just...the ending. With him saying she doesn't need him, but her saying she does, and acknowledging that she wants him back but she won't, she can't...!!! Oh, so much. In so little. So perfect. So them. I fall, clutching my breast in utter ecstasy that is brought on by the tragic, epic, semi-doomed loveliness of this ship.

And yeah, I love the ending with her and Sierra too, and the Adelle-tasticness of it...but really, I got pretty thoroughly lost in the part devoted to my oh most soul-ensnaring, enflaming and consuming of pairings, as brought to life by your lovely words.

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