This is completely spot-on and I love the little details you put in there. Also, this made me lol:
Then a new song comes on, and Kelly squeals, “Cherry cherry boom boom, Ga-aga-a!”, which Oscar thinks for a second must be some sort of secret language, the vapid twentysomething girl equivalent of Elvish.
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Then a new song comes on, and Kelly squeals, “Cherry cherry boom boom, Ga-aga-a!”, which Oscar thinks for a second must be some sort of secret language, the vapid twentysomething girl equivalent of Elvish.