ext_92453 ([identity profile] hondagirll.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2009-09-05 09:21 pm (UTC)

Oh my goodness. I loved this. You have Anne's voice down pat and I love how hauty she is with Gilbert, especially considering we all know where it leads. I love how Gilbert offers to be Romeo (eep!) and Josie's condescending grin is just like her. I especially liked this line:

Oh, how she can’t stand Gilbert Blythe! She hopes Josie succeeds in her wiling and they do get married, and have dozens and dozens of babies, all of them attention-hungry, hair-tossing brats with detestable mouths prone to twitching like that.

Lovely, lovely, lovely.

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