ext_43497 ([identity profile] azuraangel05.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2009-08-18 07:47 pm (UTC)

the sound is like the cranky adolescent love child of a scoff and a sigh.
whatever the hell you’re supposed to call it when a woman puts her hair up and gets serious about it
She’s good, inconveniently good at being interesting.
He’s always figured every pause, every cross of her legs, every word is designed with one aim in mind
there are certain things you can’t see coming, like the way she looks right now with darkness draped over her, her hair coming loose and her hand on her neck.

Lovely little fic with some drop dead gorgeous sentences (evidence above). Awesome job. Adored it.

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