Not exactly unpleasant to look at, not that that’s relevant or even something that’s occurred to him more than once. Or twice. Or – … twice.)

And

But it doesn’t change the fact that sometimes he feels like she was tailormade to drive him out of his mind.

God, that's what I love about them. Their attraction is so obviously repressed, yet they can't help but let it bubble to the surface with all these little thoughts and actions.

This was a great little moment between them, and you captured the characters and Dom's insight so well. I really did love it from beginning to end, and the thing I admire the most is your ability to keep entralled by the narration, because as insightful as Dom is, it's all the subtle undercurrents of the fic that make this so damn interesting. If only Dom knew what he had really gotten himself into.