ext_44739 ([identity profile] the-spin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2009-06-12 02:41 pm (UTC)

I meant to comment on this forever ago, but I just wanted to say that it's gorgeously done. I like that you keep their innocence from feeling silly or overwrought. It reads very naturally!

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