Love how Roger and Dominic are all mixed up in her head and the implications of that. The gun thing gave me shivers.

Really, the whole thing, top to bottom, was briliance. Love the structure and parallels and circular...ness. (It's Monday and my brain is tired and words are tricksy little things.)

I love it when you write, period, but I love it more when you write Adelle/Dominic. LET IT NEVER END.