ext_2477 ([identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2009-03-27 07:18 am (UTC)

Oh, this is lovely.

Especially:
The sun beats boldly down over everything, and a breeze (she yearns to call it a zephyr, even if it’s not a west wind – it feels like a zephyr, feels far more divine than a plain old breeze, and that’s what’s important) teases the grass and the trees and your skin.

You captured that feeling perfectly, and reminded me of that air of wide eyed wonder and whimsy about this series. Great job!

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